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English 110 Cuya Fall 08

Critical thinking
 

On English and Writing: Leon Lanzbom   




instructor: Leon Lanzbom
email: lanzbom@yahoo.com

Cuyamaca College: English 110 (0137)
summer 2008: June 9-July 17



Instructor: Leon Lanzbom               
E-mail: lanzbom@yahoo.com
Rooms: class B269/lab B-270
Class materials: Textbook: Langan, John. College Writing Skills with Readings 7th ed.


As you know, this class meets four days per week for four weeks.  That means we fit a
semester’s worth of classes into four weeks--a lot of work in a short time.  So, to stay
excited and enthusiastic, we must add empahsis to the dynamic.  Therefore, the syllabus
you are about to read will change, depending on how many hazy eyes I notice.  Fear
not, any changes will not only be announced in class, but will also be placed on our website.

M Lab 6:00 PM to 6:50 B-270
W Lab 6:00 PM to 7:20 B-270

M Class 7:00 PM to 8:25 B269
W Class 7:30 PM to 8:25 B269


T &Th Class 6:00 PM to 8:25 B269


Disclaimer:  You may find the language, or the sexual or violent content of some of the material submitted
or assigned in this class offensive. I generally do not censor class reading material. Please see me if you f
eel offended.  I will offer alternatives for any assignment.



ASSIGNMENT REVIEW

 • Four essays (2 in-class; 2 out of class) in response to topics and readings (750 words each).
 • Journals, consisting mainly of exercises from the text, freewriting, class diary etc.
 • One “out-of-class” 5 page research paper—please note topic exceptions on your hard-copy handout.
 • Five unannounced, in-class startle-response quizzes (one lowest score dropped).

*A grade of “C” or better is required on the research paper to pass the course.*


Startle-response quizzes and missing class: There will
be 5 in-class Startle-Response quizzes, otherwise known
as "check that you did the reading carefully and on time
quizzes." You can expect these quizzes from time to time,
and they will come unannounced throughout the semester.

The quizzes will primarily focus on the reading assignments,
providing me with a chance to see how well you are doing
with the readings and documentation technique, though any
area of the course may provide material for quizzes.  The whole point of these quizzes is to help us work
together, to convert what might be a boring classroom into a chaotic, unpredictable and exciting intellectual laboratory.

 *You must submit all essays, exams, and the research paper in order to pass this course.*
                              



GRADING OF ASSIGNMENTS
 
two in-class essays 10% (25 points each=50 pts)
 two out of class essays  20.0%    (50 pts. each  =  100pts.)
 two Cataclysmic Shakedowns: 30.0%    (75 pts. Each  =  150 pts.)
 one five-page research paper: 20.0%    (100pts.)
 startle-Response quizzes:  10.0%    (10 pts. each  =   50 pts.)

 journals and in-class particiption  10% (50 points)

 (Percentages are approximations):  100.0%  =   500 pts.



                 


Click Picture for your hard copy syllabus




Daily Menu English 110: 0137 June 9 to July 3, 2008

Journals: Your Journals will be worth at least
50% of your participation grade.  Most
students use one of those black spotted
notebooks, or keep a separate loose-leaf
book or separate section for their journal in
their main loose leaf.  Use your journals for 
freewriting, ideas, your own notes, scribbles,
drawings, outlines, a daily diary, and all the
chapter exercises you are required to do. 
Journals will be checked and graded on the
day of your final, but you may bring them in
earlier to see if you’re doing what has to be done. 
This is an easy grade if you keep up daily. 
Note:  Class notes are NOT a part of your journal.

Week 1------------>

Monday 6.9 (lab B270: 6:00-6:50 / class B269 7:00-8:25)


Lab B270: begin essay-quiz #1: Cause and Effect or “Why did you take this class?” Due 6.11

Write about your decision to attend this summer session—What is your main reason for taking
this class?  By taking the class now, talk about three effects that you envision (positive and negative)
on your summer and fall plans?


Your paper must be formatted properly.  The grade on this quiz will be dependent on proper
formatting.  Please read formatting instructions at the bottom of your hard-copy syllabus.  Also, go to
OWL Perdu website for formatting help in our links section.

Owl Perdu FORMATTING

Click HERE to download your essay packet.

Click HERE to download your MLA template

Class B269:
Introduction to class, first-day: syllabus review




Tuesday  6.10  (6:00-8:25 B269)


Come into class having read the following: Do exercises in your journals.

Langan: Chapter 1, “An Introduction to Writing.”  5-15, “An Introduction to writing” and do exercises 1-7 on pp19-20.  
 
==>Please pay close attention to the “The Hazards of Moviegoing.” on pp. 8-9.  

You will base your essays this semester on this essay!

Do all exercises on pp 10-12


Langan: The writing process, Chapter 2: 25-35


Assign Essay #1: Due Thursday Morning 6.19

Read the following: Narration p.203-212. pay close attention to “Adopting a Handicap’s” thesis statement on pages 209-10; Also, read “Three Passions” by Bertrand Russell, and “The Yellow Ribon,” Pete Hamill, 212-215.   Look at these essays through the lens of “Narrative.”  Notice how story can be weaved even out of simple passion for life as in Bertrand Russell’s essay.


 
You are going to then follow the instructions on the front of our essay packet and write an essay on something that happened to you and had an impact on your life.

Click HERE for your essay packet.
This packet must be filled out and handed in with your essay.




Wednesday 6.11 (lab B270: 6:00-7:20 /class B269 7:30-8:25)


Lab:  Continue on quiz one--due on my desk by
lab’s end.

Come into class having read the following:
Do all the exercises in your journals:


Langan: 35-39, including all exercises.
Langan: capitals p. 536-43
Langan: writing numbers & abbreviations p. 544-47
Langan: chapter 23 Subj. & Verbs: 449-54






Thursday 6.12 (6:00-8:25 B269)

Catch up on anything we didn’t hit during the week.
Introduction to standard essay.  Review three points of argument and thesis.

Langan: Chapter 24 fragments 455-468                    
Avoiding slang p. 598-603
Langan chapter 3: “The First and Second Steps in Essay Writing; 51-62
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Friday 6.13: Last Day to Add; Last Day to Drop without a "W" on Transcripts; Last Day to Receive a Refund



Week 2--------------->


Monday 6.16 (lab B270: 6:00-6:50   class B269 7:00-8:25)

Lab : Work on essay: “Narrative.”  

Come into class having read and reviewed the following:
Langan: CH 3 62-78

Start thinking about your final paper topic.  You must hand it in by Thursday this week 6.19




Tuesday 6.17 (6:00-8:25 B269)

Come into class having read and reviewed the following:

Langan: chapter 4: 79-104
Langan chapters: chapter 25: avoiding run-ons p. 469-81

Langan: Read and do exercises, chapter 26: 482-91




Wednesday 6.18 (lab B270: 6:00-7:20 /  class B269 7:30-8:25)


Come into class having read and reviewed the following:

Continue and catch up from Tuesday
CH 27-492-97



             
Thursday 6.19 (6:00-8:25 B269)

Come into class having read and reviewed the following:

Continue chapter 5: 105-127
Chapter 28:  498-502 (gloss over.  Pay attention to verbals.)

Essay #2: "Still Life" Description Essay:  Due: 6.30

For this, your first piece of word art, you will describe your favorite meal.  We’re shooting for  a 750 word essay that describes the image of this food, offering three points of observation and a thesis.  You must use your five senses to paint the most wonderful specific details in words, sight, smell, taste, touch, and maybe even hearing.  To make your words as vivid as possible, use strong verbs and colorful nouns--the kinds of words that appeal to the reader’s senses.  Keep away from the “to be” verbs (be, is, am, are, was, were, been, being).

Here is an example of description with almost no appeal to the senses:
The hat is being worn by the boy.

Here is an example rich in description:
Carl wears a fedora.

Notice how the second sentence not only paints a vivid picture of Carl but it also uses far fewer words (actually half the amount).  With clarity comes concision.

Download your Description essay pack at our website.
This packet must be filled out and handed in with your essay

Click HERE for your description essay packet.


June 20 CR/NC Deadline




Week 3


Final Research Paper Due: 7. 15

This paper will be a five-paragraph essay with at least two (2) works cited.  The topic for this paper should have been handed in to me last Thursday 6.19.  You must hand in the topic or lose 10 points.  The sooner you can develop an idea the sooner you can begin your paper.

We will be working with this paper in and out of class over the next two weeks, so make sure you bring your drafts and draft copies into class everyday.

You must have your rough draft for this paper ready to send to other students in class by 7.6.  You will be graded on this.  So get the wheels rolling.

download your final paper HERE.


Lab: Work on final paper

Review:  Catch up
Hand out: MLA worksheets

Helping verbs, verbals, gerunds review if needed.
Chapter 29: 503-08


Tuesday 6.24

Ch 6: 139-166 Four Bases for Revising Essays
Ch 30 Pronoun types: 510-15



Wednesday 6.25 (lab B270: 6:00-7:20 /  class B269 7:30-8:25)


CH 6 four bases cont.

Lab: Final Essay



Thursday 6.26

Run for your lives!  It's the scary, fight-or-flight midterm





Over the weekend decide on your final paper topic.  Must have by Mon.  6.30



June 27     Final Drop Deadline


Week 4

Monday 6.30
Hand in topic for final essay or lose 10 points.
Description paper on my desk

Catch up and review

MLA paper workshop



Tuesday 7.1

CH. 31 Adjectives and Adverbs
CH 32 Misplaced Modifiers 522-25
Ch 37 apostrophe: 549-56
Ch 38 quotation marks: 557-64




Wednesday 7.2
CH 33 Dangling Modifiers 526-31
Final paper due!
Review for final



Thursday 7.3

CH 39: commas!   564-74

Workshops
Possible film

On Workshops:

We will present an active workshop .  Our goal: help each other write better papers.  By Sunday 7.6, students will E-mail rough drafts to all other students who will review rough drafts at home and bring to class.  In class, the originator will read his or her draft, and then one or two other students will read the same draft, so we can get a sense of the writing in different voices.  We will then offer our critiques out loud.  At the end of class, each student will give the writer his or her draft/ critique, and give me one as well, for a grade.




Week 5


Monday 7.7
Catch up
workshop for final paper
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Tuesday 7.8
Catch up
Workshops
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Wednesday 7.9
workshops
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Thursday 7.10
Workshops
Individual meetings.
July 11th: final drop deadline



Week 6


                                                                     
Monday 7.14
Workshops
Lab continue on paper
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Tuesday 7.15
Final paper due!

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Wednesday 7.16

Review for final
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Thursday 7.17


Final!

You must bring in your journals today








 
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