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On English and Writing: Leon Lanzbom   






fall 2009
ENGLISH 580 21182

The Writing of Poetry
 

instructor: Leon Lanzbom   
email: lanzbom@gmail.com
class time: W: 4:00-6:40 PM       
class room: SH 245


Course Description: A creative writing workshop in poetry. Continuation of English 570. Maximum credit six units.   Prerequisite for all 500-level courses: Six lower division units in courses in literature and/or creative writing.








And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise.  The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt.  ~Sylvia Plath








ASSIGNMENTS:

Four to Five in-class workshop poems (33 pts).

Journal and reader responses and your favorite line list using the 5 senses. (33 pts)

Involvement, participation:(33 pts)

Good luck starting point (1 point)

Grading of assignments:                                   
Four poems                                                     33%  ( 33 pts.)
Participation                                                     33%  (33 pts)
Journals                                                           33%  (33 pts.)
One free HAPPY-G0-LUCKY Point                 1%  (1  pt)
(Percentages are approximations)                 100.0%        =      100 pts.



Books

Talking to my Body  Anna Swir

In the Palm of Your Hand, Steve Kowit

Triggering Town, Richard Hugo

250 Poems, Schakel

The Book of Luminous Things, Milosz

Poetry packets to be handed out at various times

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Dropping/Adding

It is ultimately the student's responsibility to drop all classes in which he/she is no longer attending.  
DO NOT EXPECT ME TO DROP YOU IF YOU STOP SHOWING UP TO CLASS.  

Check your schedule in the WebPortal to make sure you are enrolled in the right classes before the adjustment deadlines.  You have two separate deadlines for adding and dropping classes. The last day to drop classes is now the 10th day of the semester at 6 p.m., and the last day to add is the 12th day of the semester at 6 p.m.

The schedule adjustment deadlines for fall 2009:

Drop classes by September 14 at 6 p.m.

Add classes by September 16 at 6 p.m.

Change grading basis by September 16 at 6 p.m.

Withdraw from the university by September 16 at 6 p.m.

I have the option to drop you from my course for non-attendance or lack of required prerequisites. The fall 2009 faculty drop deadline is September 9 at 6 p.m.

Dropping and adding of classes must be done through your WebPortal account.


Attendance:

The whole point of this class is to work together, creating an intellectual sum greater than its parts.  If you miss class, you are taking away a vital part of the class mechanism, you.  As such, miss no more than two classes (2) during the semester; note that you are responsible for any work which you miss or assignments you elect to "bail on."  One last unpleasant matter: if you miss more than two sessions, you will be dropped one letter grade.  For example: If you have an A- and 3 absences you will receive a B+.   This is not negotiable.  If you believe you have an extreme circumstance, please see me.



Attitude:
When you walk into class each day on time, you will have read all that has been assigned to you for that day.  There are no excuses for missed preparation as reading assignments for a given day are clearly stated in this syllabus.  This may strike you as a bit harsh but the rule is quite simple: If you do not prepare the readings, you are not welcome in class.  Why? Because this seminar depends upon the contributions of its participants--without your input, the class is likely to evolve into a boring, three-hour waste of life.



Late Work: 

Since this is mostly a workshop, I do not accept late assignments. Assignments are due when they are due. If you believe you have a legitimate reason for missing a due date, see me or write me, before the work is due. 

No in-class writing assignments may be made up without prior arrangements made with me.

You must submit all assigned work in order to pass this course, regardless of your total points earned for the course.









There are lines which are just intended as a sort of graphic image of something, and which are not obscure by nature or because I couldn't find a better solution, but because I wanted to make them less comprehensible in order to describe a certain difficulty.  ~Miroslav Holub                                    

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Daily Menu
 
Disclaimer:  You may find the language, or the sexual or violent content of some of the material submitted or assigned in this class offensive. I generally do not censor class reading material. Please see me if you feel offended.  I will offer alternatives for any assignments.



English 580: fall 2009: Daily Menu


My goal is to keep you excited and enthusiastic about our work, and, if I'm lucky, help you fall in love with poetry (If you aren't already).  Considering this class relies on dynamics, our syllabus may be subject to change, depending on how many hazy eyes I notice.  Any changes will not only be announced in class, but will also be placed on this website, so please use your hard-copy syllabus as a base, but check our website daily.

Rule numero uno: You must come into class prepared with your poems and ready to discuss the readings assigned for that day.  In other words, whatever is listed under 9/22 should be read for our class meeting on 9/22.  The entire class experience depends on your being prepared.  



Group 1
Eric Gregg
Guadalupe Nunez-Romanillo
David Villa
Daniel Tedman
Briant Wells
Alena Good
Group 2
Francesca Fam
Mason Schoen
Carlos Kelly
Layne Scheiner
Lisa Cutter
Ember Pepper
Michelle Cordova
Group 3
Daniel Wheelock
Eren Taopn
Michelle Stankewitz
Amanda Spanier   
Thomas Perkin
Carrie Moniz
Monika Zobel


Week 01 Sept 2

Intro to class, begin The Triggering Town and In the Palm of Your Hand, first two chapters of each. 

Bring in poetry next week.  I am going to assign our groups by Saturday 9/4.

Start your journals: 2 parts: 1. reader response to all readings, and 2. Your favorite lines of poems we read.

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Week 02 Sept 9 

The Triggering Town ch 1&2

In the Palm of Your hand ch 1&2

I still have not been assigned a Black Board spot.  I'm hoping that by Tuesday, 9/8 we have one.  We can then, officially, begin our workshops by next week.

Whole-class Workshop: If possible group 1 should bring in their poems with 20 copies. We will review and workshop these in class.  Group 2 brings in their poems with 20 copies for NEXT week.

Read and be ready to discuss Steve Kowit's "The Mystique of the Difficult Poem"



Week 03 Sept 16


The Triggering Town ch3 &4

In the Palm of Your hand ch 3&4

Poem Packet #1 Click SEED PACKETS >

Group 1 poetry review




Week 04 Sept 23

Group 2: Read poems

(get each group's poems from our Blackboard page: Click SDSU link above)



The Triggering Town chs 5 & 6

In the Palm of Your hand ch 3&4

Bring in A Book of Luminous Things

Download your Poetry Quotes: click the microphone to your left


Get your five-senses sample journal HERE: 

Click the hand below



Week 05 Sept 23

Group 2 submits to BB by Sunday 9/20; the class will respond on Sept. 23d.

 

Read CH 7, "Statements of Faith, " 67-74, in The Triggering Town.

 

Read CH 7, "After-glow," 56-63, in The Palm of your Hand.

Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.

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AFTERGLOW by Raymond Carver


The dusk of evening comes on.  Earlier a little rain
had fallen.  You open a drawer and find inside
the man's photograph, knowing he has only two years
to live.  He doesn't know this, of course,
that's why he can mug for the camera.
How could he know what's taking root in his head
at that moment?  If one looks to the right
through boughs and tree trunks, there can be seen
crimson patches of the afterglow.  No shadows, no
half-shadows.  It is still and damp. . . .
The man goes on mugging.  I put the picture back
in its place along with the others and give
my attention instead to the afterglow along the far ridge,
light golden on the roses in the garden.
Then, I can't help myself, I glance once more
at the picture.  The wink, the broad smile,
the jaunty slant of the cigarette



Week 06 Sept 30

Group 3 is up!

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Read CH 8, "Ci Vediamo," 75-98, in The Triggering Town.
 
Read CH 8, "Lonely as a Leftover Thumb: Figure and Image," 64-78, in The Palm of your Hand
Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.

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GIRL IN THE DOORWAY by Dorianne Laux

She is twelve now, the door to her room
closed, telephone cord trailing the hallway
in tight curls. I stand at the dryer, listening
through the thin wall between us, her voice
rising and falling as she describes her new life.
Static flies in brief blue stars from her socks,
her hairbrush in the morning. Her silver braces
shine inside the velvet case of her mouth.
Her grades rise and fall, her friends call
or they don't, her dog chews her new shoes
to a canvas pulp. Some days she opens her door
and musk rises from the long crease in her bed,
fills the dim hall. She grabs a denim coat
and drags the floor. Dust swirls in gold eddies
behind her. She walks through the house, a goddess,
each window pulsing with summer. Outside,
the boys wait for her teeth to straighten.
They have a vibrant patience.
When she steps onto the front porch, sun shimmies
through the tips of her hair, the V of her legs,
fans out like wings under her arms
as she raises them and waves. Goodbye, Goodbye.
Then she turns to go, folds up
all that light in her arms like a blanket
and takes it with her.



Week 07 Oct 7

We've gone full circle; Group 1 is up again


Group 1: submit

Read CH 9, “How Poets Make a Living,” 99-109, in The Triggering Town. (finish the book)

 

Read CH 11, “Family Secrets,” 94-100 and Ch12, “Cut-Ups, Cross-Outs, and Ransom Notes, 102-110, in The Palm of your Hand.

Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.


Bukowski: Pimps & Whoresbukowski on people

 



Week. 8: Oct 14

Group 2: Submit to Black Board

 

The Palm of your Hand. 

Read CH 16: "Coils of Hardened Copper," 137-45,

and CH 17, "Playing with Meter," 146-53

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The meters with two-syllable feet are

IAMBIC (x /) : That time of year thou mayst in me behold
TROCHAIC (/ x): Tell me not in mournful numbers
SPONDAIC (/ /): Break, break, break/ On thy cold gray stones, O Sea!


Meters with three-syllable feet are


ANAPESTIC (x x /): And the sound of a voice that is still
DACTYLIC (/ x x): This is the forest primeval, the murmuring pines and the hemlock (a trochee replaces the final dactyl)

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iambic pentameter (5 iambs, 10 syllables)

That time | of year | thou mayst | in me | behold


trochaic tetrameter (4 trochees, 8 syllables)

Tell me | not in | mournful | numbers


anapestic trimeter (3 anapests, 9 syllables)

And the sound | of a voice | that is still


dactylic hexameter (6 dactyls, 17 syllables; a trochee replaces the last dactyl)

This is the | forest pri | meval, the | murmuring | pine and the | hemlocks
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Remember, it's up to you to do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.


Work on hand-out packet  (comment in your journals)



Week 09 Oct 21

Group 3 you're up again

Daniel Wheelock
Eren Taopn
Michelle Stankewitz
Amanda Spanier   
Thomas Perkin
Carrie Moniz
Monika Zobel
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WITNESS
 
Sometimes the mountain
is hidden from me in veils
of cloud, sometimes
I am hidden from the mountain
in veils of inattention, apathy, fatigue,
when I forget or refuse to go
down to the shore or a few yards
up the road, on a clear day,
to reconfirm
that witnessing presence.
 
~ Denise Levertov 



Week 10 Oct 28

Meetings



Week 11 Nov 4

Group one: You're on again.

Eric Gregg
Guadalupe Nunez-Romanillo
David Villa
Daniel Tedman
Briant Wells
Alena Good

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Announcing the final project

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You are to choose a poem from one of our poetry books, yes even Steve Kowit's book,  if you like, and present a study on the maker of that poet.  

You may want to bring in several other poems by the poet to show us his/her progression.

For an A, you MUST present. 

In a six to ten minute presentation, you will tell us about the poem (s), and then tell us a bit about the  poet. 



Week 12 Nov 11

No Class

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Week 13 Nov 18

Group 2 and 3 marathon: 2 & 3 will post on Blackboard.


Groups 2 and 3: we are going to try to go through both groups today.





Week week 14 Nov 25

No class: Thanksgiving



Week 15 Dec 2

Presentations this week

You are to chose one of your favorite poems, from our books. 

Make copies of this poem for everyone in class. 

You will then read the poem to the class and reveal a bit of history on the poet you had chosen.

You can  offer more than one poem from the poet you pick, but the main poem must come from any of our books, including Kowit.

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Week 16 Dec 9

Presentations continue

Bring in your journals!












 
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