instructor: Leon Lanzbom email: lanzbom@gmail.com class time: W: 4:00-6:40 PM class room: SH 245
Course Description: A creative writing workshop in poetry. Continuation of English 570. Maximum
credit six units.Prerequisite for all 500-level courses: Six lower
division units in courses in literature and/or creative writing.
And
by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the
outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. The worst
enemy to creativity is self-doubt. ~Sylvia Plath
ASSIGNMENTS:
Four to Five in-class workshop poems (33 pts).
Journal and reader responses and your favorite line list using the 5 senses. (33 pts)
Involvement, participation:(33 pts)
Good luck starting point (1 point)
Grading of assignments: Four poems 33% ( 33 pts.) Participation 33% (33 pts) Journals 33% (33 pts.) One free HAPPY-G0-LUCKY Point 1% (1 pt) (Percentages are approximations) 100.0% = 100 pts.
Books
Talking to my Body Anna Swir
In the Palm of Your Hand, Steve Kowit
Triggering Town, Richard Hugo
250 Poems, Schakel
The Book of Luminous Things, Milosz
Poetry packets to be handed out at various times
___________________________ Dropping/Adding
It
is ultimately the student's responsibility to drop all classes in which
he/she is no longer attending.
DO NOT EXPECT ME TO DROP YOU IF YOU
STOP SHOWING UP TO CLASS.
Check your schedule in the WebPortal
to make sure you are enrolled in the right classes before the adjustment deadlines. You have two separate deadlines for
adding and dropping classes. The last day to drop classes is now the
10th day of the semester at 6 p.m., and the last day to add is the 12th
day of the semester at 6 p.m.
Withdraw from the university by September 16 at 6 p.m.
I have the option to drop
you from my course for non-attendance or lack of required
prerequisites. The fall 2009 faculty drop deadline is September 9 at 6
p.m.
The whole point
of this class is to work together, creating an intellectual sum greater
than its parts. If you miss class, you are taking away a
vital part
of the class mechanism, you. As such, miss no more than two
classes
(2) during the semester; note that you are responsible for any work
which
you miss or assignments you elect to "bail
on." One last unpleasant
matter: if you miss more than two sessions, you will be dropped one
letter
grade. For example: If you have an A- and 3 absences you will
receive
a B+. This is not negotiable. If you
believe you have
an extreme circumstance, please see me.
Attitude: When you walk
into class each day on time, you will have read all that has been
assigned
to you for that day. There are no excuses for missed
preparation
as reading assignments for a given day are clearly stated in this
syllabus.
This may strike you as a bit harsh but the rule is quite simple: If you
do not prepare the readings, you are not welcome in class.
Why? Because
this seminar depends upon the contributions of its
participants--without
your input, the class is likely to evolve into a boring, three-hour waste
of life.
Late Work:
Since this is mostly a workshop, I do not accept
late assignments. Assignments are due when they are due. If you believe you have a
legitimate reason
for missing a due date, see me or write me, before the work is due.
No in-class writing assignments may be made up without prior arrangements
made with me.
You must submit
all assigned work in order to pass this course, regardless of
your total
points earned for the course.
There
are lines which are just intended as a sort of graphic image of
something, and which are not obscure by nature or because I couldn't
find a better solution, but because I wanted to make them less
comprehensible in order to describe a certain difficulty. ~Miroslav Holub
Daily
Menu
Disclaimer:
You may find the language, or the sexual or violent content of some of
the material submitted or assigned in this class offensive. I generally
do not censor class reading material. Please see me if you feel
offended.
I will offer alternatives for any assignments.
English 580: fall 2009: Daily Menu
My
goal is to keep you excited and enthusiastic about our work, and, if I'm lucky, help you fall in love with poetry (If you aren't already).
Considering this class relies on dynamics, our syllabus may be subject
to change, depending on how
many hazy eyes I notice. Any changes will not only be announced in
class, but will also be placed on this website, so please use your
hard-copy syllabus as a base, but check our website daily.
Rule
numero
uno: You must come into class prepared with your poems and ready to
discuss the readings assigned for that day. In other words, whatever
is listed under 9/22 should be read for our class meeting on 9/22. The
entire class experience depends on your being prepared.
Group 1
Eric Gregg
Guadalupe Nunez-Romanillo
David Villa
Daniel Tedman
Briant Wells
Alena Good
Group 2
Francesca Fam
Mason Schoen
Carlos Kelly
Layne Scheiner
Lisa Cutter
Ember Pepper
Michelle Cordova
Group 3
Daniel Wheelock
Eren Taopn
Michelle Stankewitz
Amanda Spanier
Thomas Perkin
Carrie Moniz
Monika Zobel
Week 01 Sept 2
Intro to class, begin The Triggering Town and In the Palm of Your Hand, first two chapters of each.
Bring in poetry next week. I am going to assign our groups by Saturday 9/4.
Start your journals: 2 parts: 1. reader response to all readings, and 2. Your favorite lines of poems we read.
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Week
02 Sept 9
The Triggering Town ch 1&2
In the Palm of Your hand ch 1&2
I still have not been assigned a Black Board spot. I'm hoping that by Tuesday, 9/8 we have one. We can then, officially, begin our workshops by next week.
Whole-class Workshop: If possible group 1 should bring in their poems with 20 copies. We will review and workshop these in class. Group 2 brings in their poems with 20 copies for NEXT week.
(get each group's poems from our Blackboard page: Click SDSU link above)
The Triggering Town chs 5 & 6
In the Palm of Your hand ch 3&4
Bring in A Book of Luminous Things
Download your Poetry Quotes: click the microphone to your left
Get your five-senses sample journal HERE:
Click the hand below
Week 05 Sept 23
Group 2 submits to BB by Sunday 9/20; the class will respond on Sept. 23d.
Read CH 7, "Statements of Faith, " 67-74, in The
Triggering Town.
Read CH 7, "After-glow," 56-63, in The Palm of your Hand.
Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.
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AFTERGLOWby Raymond Carver
The dusk of evening comes on. Earlier a little rain had fallen. You open a drawer and find inside the man's photograph, knowing he has only two years to live. He doesn't know this, of course, that's why he can mug for the camera. How could he know what's taking root in his head at that moment? If one looks to the right through boughs and tree trunks, there can be seen crimson patches of the afterglow. No shadows, no half-shadows. It is still and damp. . . . The man goes on mugging. I put the picture back in its place along with the others and give my attention instead to the afterglow along the far ridge, light golden on the roses in the garden. Then, I can't help myself, I glance once more at the picture. The wink, the broad smile, the jaunty slant of the cigarette
Week 06 Sept 30
Group 3 is up!
Read CH 8, "Ci Vediamo," 75-98, in The Triggering Town.
Read CH 8, "Lonely as a Leftover Thumb: Figure and Image," 64-78, in The Palm of your Hand. Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.
She is twelve now, the door to her room closed, telephone cord trailing the hallway in tight curls. I stand at the dryer, listening through the thin wall between us, her voice rising and falling as she describes her new life. Static flies in brief blue stars from her socks, her hairbrush in the morning. Her silver braces shine inside the velvet case of her mouth. Her grades rise and fall, her friends call or they don't, her dog chews her new shoes to a canvas pulp. Some days she opens her door and musk rises from the long crease in her bed, fills the dim hall. She grabs a denim coat and drags the floor. Dust swirls in gold eddies behind her. She walks through the house, a goddess, each window pulsing with summer. Outside, the boys wait for her teeth to straighten. They have a vibrant patience. When she steps onto the front porch, sun shimmies through the tips of her hair, the V of her legs, fans out like wings under her arms as she raises them and waves. Goodbye, Goodbye. Then she turns to go, folds up all that light in her arms like a blanket and takes it with her.
Week 07 Oct 7
We've gone full circle; Group 1 is up again
Group 1: submit
Read CH 9, “How Poets Make a Living,” 99-109, in The
Triggering Town. (finish the book)
Read CH 11, “Family Secrets,” 94-100 and Ch12, “Cut-Ups,
Cross-Outs, and Ransom Notes, 102-110, in The Palm of your Hand.
Do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.
Week. 8:Oct 14
Group 2: Submit to Black Board
The Palm of your Hand.
Read CH 16: "Coils of Hardened Copper," 137-45,
and CH 17, "Playing with Meter," 146-53
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The meters with two-syllable feet are
IAMBIC (x /) : That time of year thou mayst in me behold TROCHAIC (/ x): Tell me not in mournful numbers SPONDAIC (/ /): Break, break, break/ On thy cold gray stones, O Sea!
Meters with three-syllable feet are
ANAPESTIC (x x /): And the sound of a voice that is still DACTYLIC (/ x x): This is the forest primeval, the murmuring pines and the hemlock (a trochee replaces the final dactyl)
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iambic pentameter (5 iambs, 10 syllables)
That time | of year | thou mayst | in me | behold
trochaic tetrameter (4 trochees, 8 syllables)
Tell me | not in | mournful | numbers
anapestic trimeter (3 anapests, 9 syllables)
And the sound | of a voice | that is still
dactylic hexameter (6 dactyls, 17 syllables; a trochee replaces the last dactyl)
This is the | forest pri | meval, the | murmuring | pine and the | hemlocks ______________________________________
Remember,
it's up to you to do as many of the exercises as you want in your journals.