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On English and Writing: Leon Lanzbom   



Southwestern College
Spring 2008—34323: ENGLISH 116 (68)
Critical Thinking and Composition

14 January 2008 - 19 May 2008 (final)

instructor: Leon Lanzbom   
email: lanzbom@gmail.com
class time: M,W: 4:30-5:45 PM       
class room: RM435
                                                                                                                         
And by the way, everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise.  The worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt.  ~Sylvia Plath
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COURSE MATERIALS/TEXTS:

Lunceford, Andrea A, and John J, Ruszkiewicz, and Keith Walters. everything’s an argument: with readings. 4th ed. Boston: Bedford/St. Martins, 2007.
Hacker, Diana. A Pocket Style Manual. 4th ed. New York: Bedford/St. Martins, 2004.
Spiegelman, Art.  Maus I: A Survivor’s Tale. My Father Bleeds History.  New York: Pantheon, 1986.
Handouts, distributed by me during the semester
Notebooks, three-ring preferred
College level dictionary (recommended)



ESSAY THREE
Graphic Novels meets Wuthering Heights.
Due 4.7

Read “The Offbeat Allure of Cult Films” by Sayoh Mansaray (242) and “Pink Think” by Lynn Peril (246).  Using the topic, “Graphic Novels Are Serious Literature,” and “The Guide to Writing an Argument of Definition” on pages 234 to 239 craft a 3 page essay using examples from our book Maus and other graphic novels you might find in our library.  You should prove graphic novels ARE serious literature or, perhaps, ARE NOT serious literature.  Your choice.

Click Here for your essay packet

You must hand in this completed packet with your essay

Week Ten: 3.17-3.22
3.17-23 Spring Break: a week of west and wewaxation

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Week Eleven: 3.24-3.28
Mon. Maus 1-71: You must bring be ready to discuss any section that you believe is important.

Wed. Maus 72-129
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Week Twelvc: 3.31-4.4
Mon. Maus 129
Wed: rough draft of essay 3
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Week Thirteen: 4.7-4.11
M Ch 10 though 307; final draft for essay 3

Essay 4: Causal argument:
Date Due: Week sixteen: 4.28


You will use the “Guide to writing a causal argument” on page 307 for this one.  The causal essay is about connections.  We have each experienced situations that have changed our lives in big ways and small ways.  Sometimes the changes are positive and sometimes they're not.  But these changes, good or bad, help us to realize that for every cause there is an effect.  This brings us to our essay.  The causal essay will train you to look at these connections, to call and respond.  For example, if you’re arguing about why cigarettes are detrimental to health, you can’t just say cigarettes cause lung cancer and move on to the next subject.  You must respond to that statement and tell the reader why cigarettes cause lung cancer: Call-Response.

Your prompt:
What incident, event, or occurrence happened in your life that made you realize you are different from other people? 

Click Here for your essay packet

You must hand in this completed packet with your essay, or your essay will either be returned or have 25% of your grade deducted.



Essay 4: Causal argument: Date Due: Week sixteen: 4.28
 
Short story handout
4.11 Last day to withdraw from full semester courses and receive a “W” grade—3pm
Wed: “A&P” finish ch 10 in EA
Amy Tan in EA, "Mother Tongue."


Week Fourteen: 4.14-4.18
Mon:

discuss final and what is expected.  Hand out final prompts.

Final Essay: due one week before finals Monday, 5.

Essay by Fire (the one!)

Elegant, eclectic and clever, Gore Vidal reminds young writers that a peek into the fabulous history of the word essay, an etymological poke into the labyrinth of essays past, yields another word you might not have expected to run across: attempt.

You see most people think of an essay as a finished product--a dull, lifeless, inert textual body with a static introduction, an "ABCD" body, and a clear let’s-tie-up-all-the-pieces conclusion. You will not write this kind of final essay, opting instead to produce something that is less product and more process. Don’t get me wrong, I am STILL asking with no little nostalgia to return to the origins of the essay we’ve been working on. Yet I want you to make a sincere attempt to produce a truly unique set of ordered reflections, a group of carefully arranged tasty words which respond in some way to the essays, films, short critical treatments and lectures you have worked through and will continue to work through in the coming weeks.

Are you writing for Lanzbom? --in a way, of course you are. That means no curse words, no “hip” jargon, toss out clichés, lots of research, and staying within MLA forms.  But beyond that, and in order to do well on this assignment, you must write for another audience.

Who is this audience? Well, they are a lot like you. They are impatient and easily bored. They like specific details; they love direct, succinct quotes woven carefully into the fabric of an essay, and most of all, they like you to take chances, take risks, make assumptions, open new doors. If you are going to write about an image, they want to see a reproduction of that image. They hate misspellings and passive verbs (is, am, are, was, were, been, being). They like tangy language, which is fresh and not filled with stupid clichés.

So here we go: You will choose one of several prompts for your final paper by Monday 4.21.  Once you choose, you must use your topic.  You will have a minimum of four works cited, not including our books or the dictionary.  You may NOT use Wikipedia or any encyclopedia.  You will hand in an outline and at least two drafts.  You will use perfect MLA format works citing and if not sure how, you will get thee to the Writing Center.

                Click here for your essay prompts.

Click HERE for your essay packet: must be handed in with your essay.


Wed: “Popular Mechanics” and "Mother Tongue."

Week Fifteen: 4.21-4.25
M/W:  EA ch 13; “A Good Man is Hard to Find”;; rough drafts essay 4.

Week Sixteen: 4.28-5.2
M/W: EA ch 14 through 437; “Once More to the Lake”; “The Storm.”
Rough drafts final essay

Week Seventeen: 5.5-5.9
M/W final essay work, rough drafts
Week Eighteen: 5.12-5.16
M final essay hand in. Review for final
W. Complete final review
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Week 19: Final Exam 5.19







In-text citation from an anthology (from Hacker)

Put the name of the author of the work (not the editor of the anthology) in the signal phrase or the parentheses.

    In Susan Glaspell's "A Jury of Her Peers," Mrs. Hale describes both a style of quilting and a murder weapon when she utters the last words of the story: "We call it--knot it, Mr. Henderson" (302).
In the list of works cited, the work is alphabetized under Glaspell, not under the name of the editor of the anthology.

Glaspell, Susan. "A Jury of Her Peers." Literature and Its
     Writers: An Introduction to Fiction, Poetry, and Drama.
     Ed. Ann Charters and Samuel Charters. 2nd ed. Boston:
     Bedford, 2001. 286-302.
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Works cited from an anthology (from Hacker)

Give the elements in this order:
  1. The name of the author of the selection (not the name of the editor of the anthology)
  2. The title of the selection
  3. The title of the anthology
  4. The name of the editor, preceded by "Ed." for "Edited by"
  5. Publication information
  6. The pages on which the selection appears


If you wish, you may cross-reference two or more works from the same anthology. Provide an entry for the anthology. Then in separate entries list the author and title of each selection, followed by the last name of the editor of the anthology and the page numbers on which the selection appears.

Desai, Anita. "Scholar and Gypsy." Craig 251-73.

Malouf, David. "The Kyogle Line." Craig 390-96.

Alphabetize the entry for the anthology under the name of its editor (Craig); alphabetize the entries for the selections under the names of the authors (Desai, Malouf).

Need research help?

Click here for Mesa College Library Resources.

Click here for the Mesa College Library Catalogue.

Click here for article and reference databases


Quotations

Use a colon when a quote is introduced by an independent clause (a sentence). 

Judith Ortiz Cofer tells us: “It was as if the heart of the city map were being gradually colored in brown—café- con-leche brown.  Our color" (156).

A comma follows an introduction that offers the quote:

On writing, Amy tan says, “I use them all---all the Englishes I grew up with” (38).

Use no punctuation with the word “that.” 

Comparing our minds to the ocean, Steven King says that “I think that our minds are the same nutrient bath all the way down to the bottom, and different things live at different levels" (20).

Quotes should be placed at different parts of your sentences.  This keeps adds variety to your writing.

Beginning
“I preferred, much preferred, my version,” Maya Angelou writes in “The Angel of the candy counter" (145).

Middle
Bell hooks tells the reader that “As I wrote, I felt that I was not concerned with accuracy of detail as I was with evoking in writing a state of mind, the spirit of a particular moment” (164)—a good lesson for all writers of autobiography.

End
In “Judgment of the Birds,” Loren Eiseley explains: “It is commonplace of all religious thought, even the most primitive, that the man seeking visions and insight must go apart form his fellows and live for a time in the wilderness" (105).

Long Quotations

Long quotes are handled a bit differently than short quotes.  We place quotations longer than four typed lines in a free-standing block of typewritten lines.  Remember to keep your entire essay double spaced.  We omit quotation marks; this feels unnatural, but it is part of MLA style. Start the quotation on a new line, indenting one inch from the left margin. Your parenthetical citation should come after the closing punctuation mark. When quoting verse, maintain original line breaks.

Click here for OWL Online Writing Lab's great example of a long quotation.  Scroll down a bit, and you'll find it.

To Underline or Quote?

Just about anything you can hold in your hands should be italicized (or underlined in academic essays): books, movies, artworks, plays, long poems, pamphlets, CD's, symphanies, long musical pieces, famous speeches.  What goes inside the things you can hold takes quotations.  For example, the poem or short story that goes into the anthology takes quotation marks.  The song that goes into the cd.  This doesn't work for everything, but for titles, it works like a charm.  If you're not sure, check out one of the MLA links in the writing section of this website.




 
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